Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity level accordingly. Why is this the case?
What measure can you suggest to encourage higher level of activity among children?
Children these days have lesser activities compare to those in the past, mostly because of watching television most of the time. However, there are other factors that may contribute to this.
The televisions we are using nowadays are nothing like the ones our elders were using decades ago. televisions in this era can be used to access the internet where children can watch Youtube, cartoons, and animes. The graphics and animations they are using today are way more advance, colorful, and realistic than the old ones, which in turn makes them more appealing to the children. In addition to this, we can attach different equipments to the television, like xbox, playstations, and wii where children can play using larger screens. Moreover, aside from televisions, there are other things that can be used like laptops and tablets. All of these lead to the problem of children having less physical activities.
There are measures, however, that older people especially the parents, can implement to encourage their children to be more physically active. First, they can make a small playground outside their homes if they have the space. Back when I was young, we have a lot of street games that we used to play, which include patintero, chinese garter, agawan-base, piko, and tumbang preso. I don't know if other countries have them as well but they were basically games that made us run for hours. there are also other known sports like basketball, volleyball, and badminton. Second, parents can encourage their children to help them in cooking or baking. These may not only boost their personal relationship with their children but also rouse their children's hidden talents and artistry. Third, I think having a pet helps a lot. Dogs for example, are restless and active creatures by nature, that youngsters can mimic naturally.
In conclusion, I think there's a balance for everything. televisions may have a lot of advantages but they may also cause a concern for the children's health. It is up to the elders to encourage the young to have more physical activities and not let them stay in front of televisions for too long.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Televisions
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Suggestion: there are other; there are also
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04225352113 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62807088868 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7600345224 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260076893833 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785240019331 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620438615675 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162376611245 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275950172809 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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