Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays, the government should invest in children’s education has received a
great deal of public attention. Although this assistance is not without the disadvantages,
the upside will justify these.
Some reasons should invest in children’s education. First, children’s education would play an essential role in the mean of generation. In fact, children would guarantee the qualified workforce down the road and investing in children’s education because of the government's fund. Second, if parents can release the burden from their kid's fees of schooling, it is a good chance that they will have a good chance that they will have good take care of their offspring. For example, caregivers can have more budgets to buy better food or clothes for their children, improving their standard of living as a result.
By supporting children’s education with national budgets, the government can be unfair to those without children. It may make them feel angry or upset when their money is
not spent for their benefit. The government needs to sponsor many relevant fields, such as health care and the economy, that parents should take responsibility for paying
their children’s tuition.
Although educational sponsorship is no without the disadvantages, the upside will prove these. In conclusion, the government can bring many benefits by supporting
kid’s education in the future that make their countries to a higher level of development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 37, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49777777778 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99386698204 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6913534699 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.083333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178883100352 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781399681039 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608117484643 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076552177682 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515562416637 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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