Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school.
learning a foreign language is an essential skill for the human beings.it is often argued that youngsters should learn a foreign language from the beginning of the school life.I am completely agree with this connotation and will explain reasons for agreement.
To initiate with, it is irrefutable fact that brain capacity in learning things are better in childhood.To be more precise, in the early phase of life, mind of a child is fresh and free from the tension of responsibilites.Owning to this, they could better concentrate and learn a new language more efficiently as compared to adults.To exemplify, a survey conducted in australia reveals that the brain of a child is ten times more capable than a adult or a senior citizen.Thus, it is apparent that learning a new language from young age is more salutory.
Furthermore, children have far more flexibility in time schedule to learn anything.In other words, since children are dependent on parents for needs and requirements such as : food, cloths and books excetra.Therefore, they have no need to do a job or to earn money, resulting in huge amount of spare time.Hence, they could spend their precious time on learning a new language and enhance fluency in it.For instance, adults spend around 8 hours on job and left with no timw to learn more things whereas child has more hours to learn and improve things.Therefore, it is a massive advantage for a children to learn a language as they have much of leisure time.
To sum up, there are numerous benefits of learning a foreign language in early stage of life rather than adulthood as child has impressive brain ability to grasp language and also have enough time to improve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03845952666 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.380569225 49.4020404114 383% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.25 106.682146367 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.25 20.7667163134 343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.0 7.06120827912 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304646337285 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187784495397 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723496866168 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187784495397 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723496866168 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.7 13.0946893788 288% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.87 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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