Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet, but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution. Do you agree?
Global warming has become a hotly debated issue for recent several years. There are those who argue that governments have been aware of environment protection by different solutions but this may not strong measures to deal with climate change. I completely agree with viewpoint for several reasonable arguments.
First of all, due to economic benefits, governments are not willing to cut down amount of emission. Although governments reach to an agreement to have a treaty relating to environmental issues, there is only a small amount of emission to be cut, especially for developed countries such...
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I would like to ask you a
I would like to ask you a question that what standards do you use to mark band 7 for the above essay?
Besides, I also notice that there are many repetitions of the words Environment, Countries and Development and this makes the essay longer unnecessarily.
So please give more detailed advises as well as correction for not only this essay but also other ones.
Thanks,
Huan
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from industrial zones that has contaminated drinking water resource
from industrial zones that have contaminated drinking water resources
Sentence: Moreover, less developed as well as developing countries pay attention to development of the economy, so the invironmental issues are not concerned because these countries would like to exploit resources to export to other countries.
Error: invironmental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It seems to me that governments have concentrated on development of the econmy that they are ignorant the environmental issues.
Error: econmy Suggestion: economy
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 315 350
No. of Characters: 1729 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.213 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.489 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.034 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 68 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.489 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5