Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem.
To what extent do you agree?
With the advent of technology, the modern world has been engulfed by one of the major problems-climate change. Although there are many factors that are accountable for bringing the entire globe at the brim of suffocation, many scientists agree that the main reason for making the earth warmer is due to human activities. Some people believe that an individual should be responsible for this change, while many others claim that this has turned to be a global matter, so must be handled by international bodies. I am at discord with the given statement and think that a collaborative approach is needed to combat the rampant situation.
It is an undeniable fact that mother earth is encountering a serious threat of getting extinct due to the rise in global warming. Many factors including excess reliability on fossil fuels by industrialized countries, emissions of a greenhouse gas like methane in farming, and increasing trend of deforestation to expand farming, mines, and infrastructure are all responsible for the accumulation of harmful gases which inturn raises earth's temperature. For instance, a recent study has revealed that ice glaciers in Antarctica and Greenland have been melting six times faster than they were in the 1990's and hence the global sea level has risen by nearly 0.7 inches. Therefore, in such a dire situation, a global initiative becomes the need of the hour so that the problem can be gobbled up at a larger platform.
On the other hand, role of each individual to be a part of this agenda can not be overlooked. A single contribution at the home level can make a huge difference. For example, switching to eco-friendly methods, the use of energy-saving appliances, and avoiding cars for short distances can play a vital role towards the goal. So, in the context of saving wildlife from getting extinct to securing mother earth for upcoming generations, cooperative action is demanded from every human being.
To conclude, our precious planet has been suffering a lot from last 50 to 100 years due to climate change. It has become a moot point among masses about who should be held responsible- an individual or government at the world level for this immense change. In my opinion, it is everyone's duty to join hands at human grounds to curb the emerging problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: for
...hat an individual should be responsible for for this change, while many others claim th...
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Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1990s'.
Suggestion: in the 1990s
...melting six times faster than they were in 1990s and hence the global sea level has rise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01041666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95258758337 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3581833716 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.266666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137687649185 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443937576265 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443283143492 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864772597045 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055684767431 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.