Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased
steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows
the development of the village.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the
village.
village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994.
The given map details the renovations that have taken place in a village called Chorleywood located near London between the years 1868 and 1994.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the place had undergone numerous changes over time resulting in an improved infrastructure, extended road system, and new public facilities.
According to the given illustration, at the start of the period, a very small part of the land to the middle left of the already existed park and golf course area in the center of the map was occupied by the population. For the commute, only two main roads were built to the north and east end of the park. Then between 1883 to 1922, a new housing area accompanied by a railway station was constructed just below the old housing unit with the track passing over the main road to the left.
Furthermore, 1922 to 1970 marked the period of a significant increase in the population to the east and west of the station. Also, a new motorway was laid down cutting through the main road in the northwest of the station and connecting the same to the western end of the railway track. By the end of the period, a dramatic expansion in the population stretched the life to either side of the northern and southern ends of the motorway.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...map was occupied by the population. For the commute, only two main roads were built to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72566371681 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64665396204 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570796460177 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5824777459 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979575559506 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427594474517 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548584444776 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650338329324 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685582656493 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.