The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced

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The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.

The given diagram details the step by step procedure of how orange juice is produced. The whole process passes through eight stages as discussed below from initial fresh oranges to the final products in the market.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the process starts from delivering the fresh oranges to a factory, where it undergoes different phases before entering into a supermarket.

According to the illustration, first of all, the fresh oranges are transported into a factory, where fruits are washed thoroughly before switching into the next stage. After being washed properly, the fruit is passed through an extraction machine, which squeezes the fresh juice leaving behind the solid waste to be eaten up by the animals.

At this stage, the extracted juice is divided to be packed in two different ways. Some part of the juice is packed directly to be ready to reach the consumers. The latter part of the juice is transferred into a refrigerated truck, which is then moved into an evaporation unit. Having been evaporated to remove all the water, the concentrated juice is then packed in the small cans before shifting them to a warehouse. Further, water is mixed in the cans in a factory after which packaged drinks are transported in the consumer's market.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en up by the animals. At this stage, the extracted juice is divided to be pac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0787037037 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66753056351 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560185185185 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2512111619 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185814048997 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753405304415 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746399845796 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117624426712 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978822348882 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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