As com putters are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. disagree or agree?
nowadays, after the industrial revolution, technology is more and more appointed in human growth in a plethora of fields, including education. Somebody says that, with the continuously rapid raise, hi-tech devices will soon replace teacher’s importance due to their diversity and convenient. however, I strongly disagree with this statement.
Whatever, no one can deny the vital contributions of technology applicants in our life, especially in education. nowadays, thanks to them, information sources have become unlimited and contacted to everyone despite distance and languages with the minimum effort. A pupil can themselves refer lectures or lessons in any languages by the help of Google translation in only one click. Moreover, internet gives us more choices (videos, news, websites) and time. you can learn everywhere in any time you like or replay a video a thousand time until you understand lessons obviously.
however, we cannot just look up to advantages computers bring about and forget the teachers’ functions because the human contact is influenced people in positive ways. Regarding psychology, talking and controvert a topic face to face with teachers helps students learn how to treating human wisely and respectively, that technology devices never be able to do. As consequences, that will form a human personality and emotion naturally. Speaking with a computer, people never have ability to smile, blink, cry because they have become a robot. Imaginably, if Steve Jobs presents with a same expression and dull tone during his century speech, no one would pleasantly following all his presentation and fall asleep instead. Last but not least, teachers are people whose the most realistic and credible experiences in real life and you can draw lessons from theirs.
To conclude, although the great benefits technology brings about, teachers play an essential role in human growth, especially in nurturing people personality and behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58803986711 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96216991632 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667774086379 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5996168564 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149675473678 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447088956584 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415699849084 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881681147026 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05261744186 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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