Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective.
Comic
Books
Radio
Television
Film
Theater
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowaday, this world is going under juggernant technological advancement.everyone watch television or other media for world and local news.In my opinion, up to certain level, it is most important for communicating imformation but it has disadvantages as well. In this essay you will see pros and cons of television, radio and films.
In modern era, everyone have atleast television to connect with world.i suggest that every people must watch television.most important things about television is, you can visualise news and also you can watch latest news but television has some undesirable effects.most common effect is, you can get bad reward in terms of eyes’ glass.sometimes adult news saw on television with videos.it is bad for your child who sit besides you.
Secondly, a radio, which has positive point over television, is telecast only audio news instead of video. So that it is safe for your children.Nowadays, size of radio is too small.you can found anywhere like in cars, in mobiles etc.sometime you couldnot realise actual matter, which was happened at that time afterward you react in wrong way.
At last, In filmy world, atleast one film releases at weekend.some movies have fabulous message to every folk.everyone should watch patriotism based movies so it gives good habits.however, government cannot help every poor family.at that place a movie can movie can motive rich families to support poor families. Some adult movies also spread bad things.
To pen down, i would like to suggest that every media has it;s own pros and cons.In my opinion films is best because nowadays povery and starvation is biggest problem in world.so, film helps to support poor families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'movie can'.
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... help every poor family.at that place a movie can movie can motive rich families to support poor fa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250825082508 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.171617161716 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112211221122 0.0946595960268 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0594059405941 0.0501214627716 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0561056105611 0.0437548338989 128% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108910891089 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.023102310231 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04708134597 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.023102310231 0.0326793684256 71% => OK
Particles: 0.003300330033 0.00163938923432 201% => OK
Determiners: 0.036303630363 0.0861772015684 42% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.036303630363 0.021408717616 170% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013201320132 0.011925033212 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1702.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28044280443 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339483394834 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261992619926 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180811808118 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136531365314 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04708134597 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 72.6889504825 60.7387585426 120% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0891783567 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 33.875 20.7743622355 163% => OK
Sentence length SD: 124.383919278 49.517814964 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.75 127.492653851 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 20.7743622355 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.814263465372 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.0742619926 49.1944974215 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.69124875643 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135759335736 0.332605444948 41% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121421599869 0.102741220458 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0599808107681 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.733267783 0.534860350844 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.256496265378 0.148594505496 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736165477871 0.134430193775 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523113172719 0.0742795772207 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.223812425642 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0985651474288 0.0638462369009 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883522618332 0.228012699653 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610016291996 0.058150111329 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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