The way of life between generations has always been changing. This dissimilarities result from developments in different parts of our lives. There is a big gap between the way of my life and that of my parents. I am inclined to believe that my way of life would be more satisfying for the next generations. I am going to explain why it would be more satisfying for them by comparing my parents' time and ours.
To begin with, technology plays a key role in our lives. It has an influence on every field such as communication, transportation etc. and has facilitated our lives considerably. Today's communication is faster than before and in the future, it will be faster than it is today. Next generation will be fond of speed and it is my opinion that a faster life will be more convenient for them. For example, in order to communicate, my parents would use the post system and had to wait for a long time to get a post. Today, I use different sort of communication tools such as messenger, social media apps or cell phone and am able to do these instantly and everywhere.
Another difference between our way of lives is the way of education. In their time, education was not obligatory and common. The literacy rate was lower than it is today and most of their generation graduated from primary school. When they wanted to learn something, they had to use printed books or encyclopedias and they were less aware of their surroundings due to limited communication opportunities. They would just use newspaper and watch tv to learn what was happening in the world. But today, the way of education has changed rapidly. Even though most of us go to school for education, we tend to learn through internet by attending online courses or watching videos on the internet. To my way of thinking, online education will be more common because they will be more accustomed to these facilities.
Last but not least, transportation has improved readily in a few decades. Today's vehicles are faster and transportation prices are lesser than before. Therefore, we can travel around the world in a short period of time without much cost. We can also book a ticket in a few minutes whenever we want by using the internet. But in my parents' time, they were incapable of doing these because they did not have opportunities like today. It is needless to say that future transportation will be faster and advanced.
In conclusion, the way of life always differed between generations and it will be the same in the future. Both the previous and next generations are unlike our generation. But there is no doubt in my mind that the next generations would be more satisfying with our way of life rather than my parents' because of faster, more technological and comfortable life.
- TPO-25 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- TPO-24 - Integrated Writing Task 73
- TPO-17 - Integrated Writing Task 70
- Do you agree or disagree? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Provide examples to support your answer. 76
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree? 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 482.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7468879668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91559553128 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47510373444 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2041776788 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8965517241 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6206896552 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41379310345 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 3.4128256513 527% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270053662631 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771633443283 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939071134295 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179630897462 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120993071026 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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