Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people. How does competitive affect individuals? Is competitiveness a positive or negative quality?
Competitiveness affects people’s desire in order to optimize their own individuals quality, and such concept brings a positive quality for those who can compete with others in this global era.
Admittedly, a desire to compete with another person is caused by those who are motivated in maximizing their own self-quality. This because the trigger possibly comes from the external factor, where people want to achieve what others have achieved. For instance, if someone in a class gets a B+ grade for their middle-exam, so that such grade makes their classmate is motivated to get another high score, such as A or even A+ on the final test. Although sometimes people also get jealousy with others’ achievement, this causes people are more likely to give their best and drives them to have a positive individual quality further.
It is believed positive quality comes from competitiveness. Unconsciously, in this global era there a ton of new innovation that always be founded throughout people’s lifetime. Could you imagine if there is no desire to compete as to find the newest thing?. Its possible that people will face their life in a monotone way, so why people have to compete?. For example, in the research field, most scientists spent their time just for redeveloping or even finding a theory. This is why the competitiveness itself seems like a better future investment.
In conclusion, people are triggered by someone’s high-achievement which brings them to get what such people achieved or even more than it. Eventually, this competitiveness leads them to have a great future innovation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
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Message: Consider replacing "in a monotone way" with adverb for "monotone"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ssible that people will face their life in a monotone way, so why people have to compete?. For ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27307692308 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13184398487 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.204597347 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138787553674 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601943763846 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787549941163 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110852798902 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725865552586 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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