Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals?
Is it a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, people tend to be more competitive to achieve efficiency in their work. This trend might bring about some positive as well as negative effects to each individual. From my point of view, the advantageous merits of competitiveness are more significant.
On the one hand, being competitive will cause some detrimental influences on people. Firstly, people who possess this characteristic might be conceited and self-absorb. Their relationships with colleagues, friends or partners are always in trouble as they are unwilling to compromise if any conflict occurs. As a result, an unhealthy environment will be created, making some workers uncomfortable and leaving their organization. Secondly, being too competitive will be harmful to their health. As they are work-oriented people and usually suffer from overloaded situations to complete their goals which might lead to stress or great pressure.
Nevertheless, from my perspective, competitiveness brings about various benefits. Being competitive comprises a sense of rivalry which will motivate people to work harder and achieve their goals. For example, in school, students who have the tendency to compete with others might be able to study more efficiently and quickly. Another advantage of being competitive is that it helps to improve the working efficiency in many organizations and enhance productivity. That is the reason why lots of companies nowadays try to recruit and preserve competitive employees as they are resilient and hard to give up in working.
In conclusion, there are numerous competitive individuals in society these days. Although they might have to suffer from its drawbacks, I strongly believe that competitiveness is a necessary quality and it benefits both the workers and the companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59259259259 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23874859404 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.452096512 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223718364537 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077755536403 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542608400275 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154956725738 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579094373934 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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