Competitiveness is a skill that is required in modern society in order to succeed. How does competitiveness affect the individual? Is it a positive or negative quality?
In this era of globalization, it has become utterly needed to possess a wide range of skills in order to have success, and being competitive is a crucial one. It is undoubtedly that this feature can substantially benefit individuals as well as society, and I will illustrate this in my essay.
To begin with, being competitive is a significant aptitude of a potential applicant for a promising job. For instance, if there is a high number of people that apply for a well-paid job, this trait can alleviate the road to success of the applicant, as corporations are seeking to find such employees, which can help in boosting the company yield. Moreover, a team manager bestowed with this skill can instill in his subordinates the sense of competitiveness, and this can lead to very good results in terms of profitability on the market.
Secondly, it is well known that without competitiveness, nations would fail to develop at such an accelerating pace. Take the example of the inventors who revolutionized the world, through the advent of the Internet, which has led not only to the growth of all nations, in particularly the underdeveloped ones, through improvements in international trade and strengthen the liaises among countries, but also to a higher education of the individual. In other words, without being competitive, the human race would lack innovation and the world would stagnate at an undesirable level.
To conclude, I would argue that competitiveness is imperative rather than detrimental, as it brings countless benefits for the future development of both nations and individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for instance, in particular, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16153846154 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30707507658 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7251161536 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.111111111 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1111111111 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081256439171 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037599100663 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451388593954 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557443926633 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418741968356 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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