The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show how a wind turbine looks like and where it can be placed.
The wind turbine consists of a tall tower, which made of strongly stainless steel and there are three blades made of fiberglass or wood on the top of the steel tower. These blades are controlled by a computer that connected with a sensor, this wind sensor would run the direction and angel of these three blades after receiving information from the computer. As a result, a wind turbine can generate 1.5 megawatts of energy with maximum wind strength.
Meanwhile, there are three different positions that a wind turbine can be placed. A big wind turbine would be built up in hilltop, where the wind is strongest also. A smaller one can be found in the domestic or countryside, less impact by wind strengths but it could yield 100 kilowatts of power. And a third position is in the deep sea, but the wind strength is still strong for harnessing energy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, therefore, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7247706422 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46143557615 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48623853211 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.912341488 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177637146022 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909940889174 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548541700531 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123514341026 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557633831616 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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