Write about the following topic.
Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It becomes more and more popular for people to be self-employed rather than being an employee of a company. Although this choice certainly has some risks and disadvantages, I believe that this is a brave decision and takes many benefits over time.
There are two main dangers to startup. The first one is financial risk. You must have a large amount of savings or even go into debt to get started besides capital from investors. If things don’t go well, you may face substantial financial loss. In addition, there might be times, especially in the first few years, when the business isn’t generating enough cash for you to live on. The further disadvantages is stress. As a business owner, you have bewildering array of things such as competition, employees, bills, equipment breakdowns, customer problems and salary to worry about.
On the other hand, starting own business has some advantages. The main reason is independence. You are a boss, you cannot get fired. You also have freedom to make any decision regarding your company without being governed by someone else. Another reason is that you can get high finacial rewards. In spite of high financial risk, running your own business gives you a chance to make more money than if you were employed by someone. The last reason is personal satisfaction. Because you are a founder, you will be able to not only work in a field that you really enjoy but also use all of your skills and knowledge to get success.
All in all, I think that the advantages of startup are greater than disadvantages. However, someone that decides to start his own business should think carefully before making decisions in order to operate the company in the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, well, i think, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90721649485 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69387315276 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4205752452 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1578947368 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170778255917 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477568148287 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461529549271 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950243227637 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150507368273 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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