Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
A rapid rising of population in large city causes many pressing issues that many countries have currently faced. To tackle them, both Government and individuals must combine with each other in order to determine solution.
One of the most noticeable of overpopulation is housing shortage. The land area is unchanged while the number of citizens is increasing and insufficient or poor quality infrastuctures leads to homelessness, resulting in lots of people sleeping in the parks or even under the bridges. Another serious consequence of overcrowding is being lack of food. The rising of population makes the supply of food in urban not enough to provide for everyone in the near future.
To deal with accommodation shortage, Government should invest more in infrastucture. Old houses and wild land must be planned for building apartment blocks via public private partnership to provide homeless people with residences at lowest possible price. Besides that, the housing problem is more easily solved if Government makes use of the land on the edge of the city. However, to solve this issue completely, people must combine with the Government by initiatively asking authorities for housing supporting.
In parallel with housing, we also must take measures to address food shortage. The Government must have policies to encourage seld-produced food and to import the food from agricutural provinces. In addition, people must not waste food and it is good solution to take full advantages of all land and terrace to grow vegetables and small fruit trees.
In conclusion, it is clearly to see that some serious consequences caused by overpopulation in urban area. However, if Government and individuals work together, problems that are difficult will also be solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance, i suppose, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87900355872 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6223146236 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1648501093 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23231944412 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853836948268 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462290002418 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141275794477 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377084766474 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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