Computer is the most important invention in last one hundred years. what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions vary on whether computers are the most essential breakthrough over hundred years or not. I can understand why some people devote that view, however, there are a number of inventions playing a crucial role in daily life.
It is undeniable that computers are a beneficial facility to some extents. The major contribution is the enhancement of work productivity, which tackles the overloaded work for employees. To take an example, in the past, an accountant had to deal with huge tasks which included a lot of numbers and complex calculations, thus this was time-consuming and required a great effort while the heavy workload can be solved thanks to the computational technique these days. As far as I am concerned, computers turn a new page for technological innovation as the algorithms can bring solutions for unforeseen issues and be the fundamental tool to create a lot of new methods such as smartphones or tablets.
Despite the aforementioned arguments, another invention should be mentioned is the Internet, which brings a turning point for human in terms of knowledge acquisition and the fact that helps maintain contact with other people. One of the most contributions is that helps widen the human connection, which enables people to come closer, for example, Facebook is the main tools, giving oversea students opportunities to keep in touch with the family living far away. Another beneficial effect is that satisfies the acquisition of knowledge when it is easier to search everything people would like to know on the Internet rather than heavy books compared to the past.
In conclusion, I agree that computers are extremely useful, however, I think the Internet is the other invention being beneficial for human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1914893617 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0281362543 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0968985657 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.4 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108921772917 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480004554012 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441789595769 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803783798386 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375931567416 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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