team and individuals sports

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team and individuals sports

Opinions are divided on whether the team sports are better or whether people should join in individual sports more. I believe that both of them have different benefits which should be considered.
The sports play in team have brought many positive impacts in relation to skill improvement and expansion of networks. Regarding to the former, working for team helps to enhance the co-ordination from members to achieve team goals, besides becoming a leader is a wonderful chance to gain leadership ability, as a result, people may advance self-growth in both physical fitness and thinking. The other major contribution is that establish networks, for example, people can meet friends and share together all the difficult moments in practice, encourage to confront tiresome experiences.
On the other hand, individual sports have offered some benefits regarding to self-development and the fact that the personal demonstration can be emphasised. As far as the first idea is concerned, it would be an opportunity to rely on themselves when coping with a greal deal of hardships require making decisions in playing strategies. This leads to self-reliance development and independent people. Another element needs to be taken consideration is chances to demonstrate personal skills and talent. Not alike as team sports, the whole team has mentioned, the member names may not heightened while individual sports provides spaces for sportspersons to reveal their ability completely. Their names have recorded impression into fan’ hearts.
In conclusion, each kind of sports have specific advantages on their own, I believe that the choice depends on the purpose and the hobby of individuals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'confronting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: confronting
...ifficult moments in practice, encourage to confront tiresome experiences. On the other han...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48659003831 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02653861635 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8086648312 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351100253552 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115575007958 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147431629873 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203071345891 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879640084463 0.056905535591 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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