a holiday went wrong
I am an extroverted person and live out of the suitcase “traveling is my life”, but I still remember the time I got an accident in Dallas. This was my sorrow holiday. It was back when I had been a freshman, I had decided to have a backpacking holiday for a long weekend. This was the first time we set our foot on Dallas. I had heard a lot about Dallas which was famous for cool weather and many breaking taking views such as tea plantation, flower gardens, ghost bungalows, acoustic café. Besides, we would love to sample as much of local cuisine we could fit in our stomach. We had an exciting plan with a quote “enjoy until we die”. But at the beginning of the journey, I met with an accident which caused my leg broken. Every stunning view I always dreamt become vanish. I couldn’t wear winter clothes such as the wool scarf, wool dresses, ... I had prepared because I had no chance to show them at Saigon weather. I was extremely disappointed. Also, I had to admit to hospital for a couple of weeks. But the coin has two sides, my friends tried to bring my solace. They canceled their trip because of me, as well as taking care of my whole time I was in the hospital. In addition, they told me a lot of humorous stories to cheer me up. I reckon that everything happened for a reason and thanks to this bad event, I could recognize how precious my friendship was. I promise to myself to appreciate our relationship as much as I could.
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- education is the basis human right and shouldn't be free 61
- Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages. 78
- These day, people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 56
- My favorite book 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 946, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... chance to show them at Saigon weather. I was extremely disappointed. Also, I had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, well, i reckon, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40221402214 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70516044958 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6608160315 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2777777778 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0301146548826 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0128804138923 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382250602188 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0301146548826 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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