These day, people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Today, one person can work many different jobs. They often alter their career not only one time but also many times throughout their life. This has brought a lot of benefits as well as drawbacks.
People work in more than one job that means they can earn more money for living. One obvious thing is the more money you have, the better the living conditions you get. We cannot deny that if you have much more money, you can have afforded to do charity and help poor people or disable people. Another positive impact of having more than one job is people might collect more experiences, make more friends and colleagues. Their relationship is opened and they might have a colorful life what is brought thanks to a lot of awesome friends who are extremely good at in each major. Changing the job to find out the most suitable job for myself, which derive enthusiasm and excitement in working. Moreover, each job required employers become experts in their major. Hence, if a person works in many jobs, they might have a large knowledge about it and be accomplished in many things. Who does not want to be a person who know-it-all? Because of the connection between jobs, a wide knowledge about one job can support other jobs to work flexibly.
On the other hand, doing many jobs at the same time is extremely hard. People can be exhausted because of pressure and hard-working. The high requirements of each job put a lot of stress on their shoulder, they lack energy, get depression, and lead to the worst result is committing suicide. There is more and more miserable news which published in newspapers every day about that. One of the drawbacks is the job hopping cannot bring to people a stable income, which is very necessary for daily life. For example, a man does not have a steady career and stick in debt since he cannot pay for the monthly bills. As a result, he cannot afford for his children to go to school. This leads to his wife would like to start divorce proceedings from him. He neglects his duties in the workplace and loses his job. In addition, people who often change their career might know a lot but they are not proficient in any majors. This is time-consuming, waste a lot of effort, and waste money in training new staff which causes the loss to the company. They lack experiences and do not bring any profit to their employees.
To sum up, people might take account into choosing their jobs like a quote “Jack of all trades and master of none”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Today, one person can work many different jobs. They often alter their career not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60496613995 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.448293303 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51467268623 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3773794449 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4615384615 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0384615385 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33158000594 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874713001836 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070579701798 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199245021409 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716736763071 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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