Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
Nowadays computers play a big role in educational settings and school teachers as well as university professors tend to use them while teaching. Although some people believe that this might have some damaging consequences, others, including me, think that the presence of computers in educational settings can have a number of benefits.
Using computers at schools and universities will probably make the educational setting more environmentally friendly as students will be likely to use paper books and notebooks at a lower frequency. Every year a large number of books are printed on paper and delivered to students as a result of which a high number of trees are cut down. Using computers, students can have access to the PDF version of the books and make a huge contribution to saving the environment. Furthermore, computers can give students hands-on experience with the lessons they learn. Most engineering majors like electronics and mechanic require students to perform tasks using software such as MATLAB. If computers were not available at schools and universities, such students would learn these lessons at the level of theory.
On the other hand, some argue that frequent access to computers will result in some students using them for purposes other than education such as downloading movies and playing games, and will also reduce students’ interactions with their peers. However, these systems are usually linked to each other and are supervised by a central server which will most probably deter students from using them for their own personal tasks. Moreover, most school and university projects are done in pairs and groups which forces students to socialize with each other and this renders the concern for reduced
interaction insignificant.
In conclusion, although some people believe that computers might have negative impacts on the educational settings, I believe that the benefits are by far more than the disadvantages and both instructors and students are greatly assisted by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40063091483 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87605829767 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533123028391 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0126825991 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.666666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185227628941 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684855808312 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458465376085 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976456746957 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542183002162 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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