Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
nowadays without technologies people can't live like bird without wings. Computers are the most impact on a human being because in past time people work on manual system but later all of this doing in computer. i am agree with this statement much impact having a computer device.
First of all people are in this era day by day lazyness, so use short cut way and easy to do work. Computer have fullfield demand of people because before technology human being did big amounts of calculation without use any machine but after computer all should are in just of seconds to do. Not only calculation but all another task are now easy for people becasue all of this responsible is computer.
let's example our relative live outside in country and we live in india with internet and computer facility we chating each other even video calling its feel like in front of us.
On the other hand specially for children sometimes of nagative aspect because continues gaming,movies all that stuff bed impact on his mind so better to do his parents some make restriction against his children, if children are use for his educational that is good thing for him but more than seatting on computer screen its not good for health.
To recaptulate my points computers are the god because all working system have quickly and without any errors. sprading technology in world day by day incresing people are easliy do their on work .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
nowadays without technologies people cant live l...
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Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
nowadays without technologies people cant live like bird without wings. Computers...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...most impact on a human being because in past time people work on manual system but later ...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ut later all of this doing in computer. i am agree with this statement much impac...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut later all of this doing in computer. i am agree with this statement much impac...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ter all of this doing in computer. i am agree with this statement much impact having ...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: SHORT_CUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcut'?
Suggestion: shortcut
...in this era day by day lazyness, so use short cut way and easy to do work. Computer have ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lets
...e all of this responsible is computer. lets example our relative live outside in co...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...e all of this responsible is computer. lets example our relative live outside in co...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , movies
...nagative aspect because continues gaming,movies all that stuff bed impact on his mind s...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sprading
...em have quickly and without any errors. sprading technology in world day by day incresin...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...esing people are easliy do their on work .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76326530612 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46809571608 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587755102041 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1419610573 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.7 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134937014789 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612948133085 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427809260653 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756597431574 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337956932766 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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