Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Information technology has revolutionized the world, and is arguably the paramount invention of the last century; this essay is aimed at presenting valid arguments to support this thesis.
Firstly, the very omnipresence of computers in all spheres of life is the best proof of its importance. No other invention proved so versatile being used on such a wide scale both on a global level, and everyday household usage. The example of the former could be computers on space stations that provide information on the weather condition and can warn about cyclones or tsunamis help locate forest fires; all of the above-mentioned information could be crucial for saving people's lives. On the other end of the scale would be personal computers and smartwatches which can help people keep fit.
The second reason why I believe in the immense importance of computer technology is its contribution to healthcare. Medical science experienced a revolutionary breakthrough with the development of a wide range of apparatuses and gadgets which have brought research, diagnosing and treatment on an incredible level. Ultrasonic research, for instance, has given surgeons the opportunity to do laparoscopy with minimal invasion into the body. MRT can reveal the slightest changes in human organs at the very early stage, which gives people much higher chances to recover rapidly.
Some people would argue that there were some more important inventions made within the last one hundred years. For example, several people have recently completely recovered from AIDS, which was considered to be incurable. However, it is highly likely that to achieve this result researchers and doctors used cutting-edge medical equipment. Whichever recent invention we think of, most of them either have computer technologies as the intrinsic part or based on them.
To sum up, I firmly believe that there was nothing more significant invented than the computer due to its versatility opening new opportunities for mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s or tsunamis help locate forest fires; all of the above-mentioned information could be cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42628205128 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96594570224 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3926660784 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214700286067 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065510187027 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468973055213 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105965776951 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441290793038 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.