Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
I believe in the fact that computer is one of the greatest invention in the world. In order to support this view, let me quote the sentence of Edsger Wybe Dijkstra, a Dutch scientist in computing science, once said: “Computer Science is no more about computers than astronomy is about telescopes”. This quote assures the computer’s extraordinary competence brings to human society. If we do not have computers that is considered like we look up in the sky with our naked-eye, we only see some basic sceneries such as the sun, the moon, clouds and tiny glowing dots. Our consciousness of astronomy is just there.
Thanks to the appearance of computers, the world had been getting some positive changes to two main aspects of existence which are material life and spiritual life. Initialy, approaching to the first aspect which is related to substances, computers have ability to make money and products in order to meet human needs. For instance, every countries in the world have their own money’s designs whereas people incapable of drawing billions of money paper, thus computers can help us program a huge number of blueprints for many denominations of money then operate the money printing line with just one press of “Enter”. In terms of manufacturing products, computers contribute to paint the item’s image so buyers can visualize easily the goods and decide what should they purchase. It is not only convenient for consumer but also save time and efforts for companies.
Touch on the spiritual life, computer changes the perception of human being, It not only helps us entertain and relax by connecting with people who are both acquaintance or strangers and playing games those are types of game that contain big data and can only be played on a computer, not any other types such as mobile phones or smartphones. But also enhance our knowledge about the world. For example, we can sit at home and know everything about the world through a computer screen, watching the beauty of our earth more clearly than doing the same thing through a phone’s screen. Moreover, we can find a lot of information that we need and update many hot news in the world.
In a nutshell, computer plays a vital role in our life. It creates the new ways the world operates, brings great benefits that we have never thought before and leads us close together. Our mission is keep improving its functions and training children how to use it for right purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...ld. For example, we can sit at home and know everything about the world through a co...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much hot news', 'a good deal of hot news'.
Suggestion: much hot news; a good deal of hot news
... of information that we need and update many hot news in the world. In a nutshell, compu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86043985736 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599520383693 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.6921557505 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.647058824 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108713285056 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353942938783 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231067055191 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645954428155 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235042696586 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.