It is believed that computers have been admitted to be the most significant device for the last decade. Personally, I totally agree with this assumption due to the automatic machines and multiprocessor ability.
To begin with, the computer's existence has brought us a peak to the new generation where almost everything is automated. By using the algorithm, we have invented the car, the phone, virtual assistant,... which play an important role in our life, these inventions not only bring convenience but also give us chances to stay in touch with people we love. For instance, we are no longer using a hand-writing letter to contact each other, instead, we have a smartphone, which allows us to see or talk at a remote distance.
Moreover, information technology has reduced the number of works that humans used to deal with. Computers are superior machines in doing multi-tasking such as playing music while doing complex mathematics. This brings comfort for people and allows them to have more time for relaxing and family. For example, computers can automatically analyze information while we are sleeping and give us the most accurate result.
In conclusion, computers are the most significant inventions which have an influence on civilization due to it's automation and supportive function with modern society.
- Although there is a lot of translation software available learning a language still could be advantageous To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Nowadays more and more people want to travel to remote areas such as the South Pole Do the advantages of this type of travel outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 67
- Some people believe that governments are responsible for the increase in obesity in children while others think it is the fault of the parents Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement 77
- Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional and religious festivals during festival periods people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...iprocessor ability. To begin with, the computers existence has brought us a peak to the ...
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Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ed the car, the phone, virtual assistant,... which play an important role in our l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26066350711 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01152671291 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654028436019 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0109187684 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177065993605 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695418623521 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349750389639 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11602061471 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364469909169 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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