Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is often supposed that computers have become the most vital invention for the last hundred years. While many pessimists argue that using computers can have a bad influence on our society, I believe the advantages of computers outweigh the drawbacks and support the former viewpoint.
On the one hand, computers may have many downsides. Firstly, when they gradually become popular over the world, it can lead to an increase in cybercrime which may harm one's security and financial health. To explain, there are many cybercriminals who can get access to others' computers by infecting them with a virus. As a consequence, the personal information can be attacked by the hackers for reselling. Moreover, when the hackers have the ability to access others' computers, they can steal financial accounts, credit card and other payment card information so it may do harm to the others' financial health. Likewise, if one spends too much time sitting in front of the computer's screen, his eyes and muscles may suffer strain due to the lack of exercise.
On the other hand, despite the drawbacks, computers also bring humans many conveniences. Firstly, they are likely to make the way of communication easier. For instance, there are many applications on computers such as Messenger, Zalo where people can make a call or text a message with others all over the world. Moreover, during the Covid-19 pandemic, computers are the best way for the students and workers to learn and work. Hence, humans can avoid the spread of the disease in the community so it can disappear faster.
In conclusion it is undoubted that computers can do harm to people's health and finances, but I am of the opinion that they are the most important invention due to the efficiency they bring to humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...n increase in cybercrime which may harm ones security and financial health. To expla...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...undoubted that computers can do harm to peoples health and finances, but I am of the op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98316498316 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73045082318 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9911520113 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150119052011 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057336951738 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650389983683 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113609556492 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620023298512 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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