Computers have been confirmed to be the central innovations in the last century. There is no doubt about computer's assistance to humans. In my opinion, several inventions aid the society which remarkably helpful. This essay will discuss the excuses that led to my asset.
To begin with, the existence of computers has conveyed some crucially positive change to our civilization. By using its functions, people now are available to connect with the world and distant love ones within a click. This occurrence brings numerous advantages since it is time-saving and handy. For instance, lettering used to be the most common form of expressing thoughts through remote areas and it was proven to take time and many unpredicted issues but online texting could prevent those problems. Another support is the superiority of computers shows in multitasking ability. We could listen to music while reading the news on a device.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the world has been modified by others innovations besides computers. The first to be named is vaccination, a significant solution that has been cultivated in the cure of the Covid-19 pandemic. Envisioning a spectacle without vaccinations, human-being would soon face the doom of the world. Another mass human product is the distant operation in medicine. It was irrational to do a sophisticated operation without a directly attendant and this had caused remarkable repercussions such as the death of patients due to the time. With the existence of this technology, doctors these days could operate from a remote distance. This is attributed to the recovery of several people. In Vietnam, there was a heart-impaired patient who was fortunate to be cure punctually by this method, for instance.
In conclusion, despite the indispensable features of computers, it would be misguided if recognized as the most fundamental invention of the century due to other's outstanding existence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28896103896 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05503263574 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626623376623 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6121790405 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7368421053 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180916571166 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481720485556 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310318843356 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105575221236 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015531836755 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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