Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many believe that computer machines are almost the finest creation of human beings in the 20th century. I strongly agree with this statement, while humans have had numerous creations on their list over the last ten decades, computers outweigh all of them in terms of accuracy, efficiency, speed, and storage. In this essay, I will argue why computers are the supreme technology invented in the recent century.
To commence with, computers are able to process immense amounts of data flawlessly without requiring any break. Moreover, they are always logical and well-structured no matter how hard calculations are given to them. For instance, a scientific calculator which is a top-notch machine was built many years ago, yet today it can solve almost all of the mathematical scientific questions and without a doubt, the answers will be error-free. For this reason, calculator computers are still enormously supporting many students, teachers, and even scientists for solving arduous queries.
Furthermore, these internet appliances are increasingly replacing humans at several workplaces owing to the ability to store huge amounts of data and produce rapid results when asked. Australian supermarkets have installed computers at billing counters because they are able to read the price tags of countless items from their database and generate the bill more quickly compared to the counter-person. Consequently, these billing machines which are computers in general, are proved to be way faster and productive.
To conclude, I certainly believe that computers are the top innovation of humanity in the last century considering their potentiality of rapid pace, efficiency, flawlessness, and storing huge data compared to other technologies ever built till date.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ears ago, yet today it can solve almost all of the mathematical scientific questions and w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58364312268 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98250172471 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639405204461 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2995974294 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.545454545 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159233297457 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597856681254 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040073900704 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871364283125 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502696152995 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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