Computers becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.
Nowdays, with the advance technology our life become more easy and comfortable. If we think life is impossible without this technology. But, today the topic asserts that computers become a important part of school education. Now, I am going to examine some possible points with the following paragraph and shape up my opinion by end.
Yes, it is true, computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons but why? There number of answers related to this topic. First of all, in this modernisation era, computers is used in every sector. So that, it is very beneficial for the students for further development. Moreover, students can easily get the knowledge through this technology and polished himself from the computer and they also get the general knowledge as well as sharp our mind due to the games like as; KBC, puzzle etc. Take for instance, kaun banega crorepati is famous game in my country, which is hosted by famous personality amitab bachan at tge national platform and the participants selected in this game at the higher general level, who has collection of information all about the word. Besides, if they become proffesional in this field then they have countless opportunities as well as high salary packages.
Furthermore, there are some drawbacks of usage of computer. Due to using computers, it cause several health problems ; such as eye sight, lazy and so on. Apart from that, today the the youngsters don't like to perform any physical activity, mostly they like to play indoor games on the computer, so that, it is harmful for them for body growth. For example, recent research suggests that more than half quarter people are chatting on Facebook and whatsApp and other social sites, so they are not active regarding their health issues.
To sum up, after discuss the whole problems, I still believe that technology beneficial for us, if we use it with own limits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the topic asserts that computers become a important part of school education. Now...
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...of computer. Due to using computers, it cause several health problems ; such as eye s...
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...cause several health problems ; such as eye sight, lazy and so on. Apart from that, today...
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Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62812238112 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64465408805 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7977456008 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129352560936 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503350057694 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953648839059 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720877299615 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568054731643 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.