In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because woman are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring to. What extend do you agree?
Marriage is a process by which two people make their relationship public, official and permanent. In the current time of technological advancement, one of most pressing concerns is regarding with the given topic assured that, If woman earn their own income and should they need to get married or not? I completely agree with this statement and I am going to explain some various points to following the paragraph.
Firstly, In all over the world, women are earning good salary and they are self satisfaction. But there are more other reasons behind to the women, why she not get married. Reason are: Domestic violence, Education, Freedom, Extra responsibilities, and so on. If i explain the education at our past time, women are not well qualified. They always depends on the men and her responsibilities to take care the child and house. But in modernization era, Women are good qualified and earn good income. They have not depend on other person.
Furthermore, Domestic violence is also a main reason behind this essay. Because in this modernisation era every women is good skilled and if we compare to her with the past time then they are very advanced and they have not want everyone ruled on them. They should live full of freedom in life. They think that if they good earnings then why people want dowry after marriage. After that if I talk about expectations of well qualified women, they want a life partner according to our choices. Whose that sacrifice every problem with her.
In conclusion, we have seen that, There are number of answers to this questions. Delhi university surveyed that, women are connected with the social world. So they want full freedom which they expects from our partner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...easons behind to the women, why she not get married. Reason are: Domestic violence,...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., Extra responsibilities, and so on. If i explain the education at our past time,...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...o on. If i explain the education at our past time, women are not well qualified. They alw...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...men are not well qualified. They always depends on the men and her responsibilities to ...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ied and earn good income. They have not depend on other person. Furthermore, Domest...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...illed and if we compare to her with the past time then they are very advanced and they ha...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
...hey are very advanced and they have not want everyone ruled on them. They should liv...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: WHOSE_DT[5]
Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: Who's
... life partner according to our choices. Whose that sacrifice every problem with her. ...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whose” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... life partner according to our choices. Whose that sacrifice every problem with her. ...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...en that, There are number of answers to this questions. Delhi university surveyed th...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...d. So they want full freedom which they expects from our partner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9275862069 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68378005553 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6898954291 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2105263158 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973771571617 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293741282282 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394310422649 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069938408073 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709934659311 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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