In many countries, woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because woman are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?
These days, women in various countries tend to overlook the importance of marriage, which is resulted from their ability to have an independent source of revenue. Consequently, the financial benefits of getting married is no longer essential for them. Personally, I firmly believe that modern females can be self-reliant and they may have other things more important than the marriage such as their work and families.
First of all, it is obvious that women now can have the right to access education and make their own money. In the past, their responsibility was taking care of the upkeep of their homes and they could not attend schools or work. Therefore, their life was dependent on the husbands. However, thanks to the equality between males and females, girls can afford the education and employment opportunities, which will contribute to the global economy. To be more specific, they can possess both physical and intellectual capability to have the same, even higher, position as boys do. As a result, women will consider the financial supports from men as of no importance.
Secondly, that people, especially females, want to spend their time enjoying the life is undeniable. Whenever they have the economic capacity, they would desire for fascinating themselves by travelling or playing sports. Furthermore, some youngsters would opt for looking after their parents instead of setting up their own family. This is because they want to express the gratitude to those who have sacrificed so much to raise their children. Additionally, the rate of breaking up is said to be higher than before, thus some women may decide to stay single and spend time on themselves or their relatives.
In conclusion, women in this era is believed to be more self-sufficient so the money from their husbands may be no vital for them anymore. My view is that females can absolutely have a meaningful life without getting married but with their social relationships and families instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16408668731 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83431079413 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.598988809 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15669566107 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544007049334 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295885974267 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100868248012 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107400455919 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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