The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Nowadays, the number of people inhabiting this planet increases every day with no reverse effect. Experts argue that it is the most serious problem which people face. As far as I am concerned, this issue is associated with an entangled complex of minor problems which then results in deteriorating impact on our planet and its inhabitants.
One of the main factors which cause overpopulation is, at the first sight quite innocent, progress in medicine. Thanks to the improvement in doctor's abilities, we are now able to treat even an aggressive diseases, which were very demanding to get rid off in former years. Moreover, even a life-threating injury which requires a strenuous operation is now handled with ease and appropriate curing. This is the main cause of longevity which is related to the overpopulation on earth.
However, I think that the worst enemy is a human being itself. Development in heavy industry (building large factories which produce exhaust fumes) worsens the quality of the environment and intensifies global warming. That leads to the process of forming places that are uninhabitable thanks to this effect. Littering and deforestation also contribute to creating certain areas with inconvenient conditions for living. Furthermore, unsuccessful space explorations are slowing down the potential opportunities to move onto some habitable planet.
To conclude, everything is connected. One tiny problem cannot do much harm on people or environment but the massive bulks of minor problems that humanity has to face will do even more damage in the future than we might think. Hence, we should concentrate on eliminating these minor troubles and therefore prevent a terrible catastrophe that awaits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
...re now able to treat even an aggressive diseases, which were very demanding to get rid o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3962962963 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03411105663 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662962962963 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9107429521 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136306185866 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412390838396 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546334244694 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793164313379 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440992482916 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.