With a massive development in a variety of fields, Customer's needs are increasing. There has an upward trend that The vast majority of people claimed that people may purchase the similar products through all over the world. This notion has still remained a source of controversy and In my point of view, it has both positive and negative effects. I will list my justifications in the essay that follows.
On the one hand, These arguments can be the attributable to the greater demand of buyers. It can lead to greater economic growth and development, as well as increased access to goods and services for people in different countries. For example, A big business or companies want to be successful, it has full of marketing campaign as well as meets the demands for customers, thereby, would be a prestigious belief and monopoly's images on the commercial market.Moreover, Those who pay for the same products can have a deeper comprehension and cooperation between cultures, which some people may view this as a negative development
On the other hand, the issue as to whether the same products can appear as some counterproductive features. It can also lead to cultural homogenization and the erosion of local traditions and customs. Furthermore, It can lead to a loss of cultural diversity and the displacement of traditional industries. To be specific, When a monopoly product of a big business is published out the commercial market. Immediately, There would be thousand of fake products and evenly it can overshadow the merits of real ones. This can result in the loss of culture values and morals in each country.
In conclusion, people catch up the trend that buying the same products anywhere is pros and cons. Whether this trend is positive or negative depends on one's perspective and values. For some aforementioned ideas above, they will purchase some products at our own pace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02229299363 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05938923138 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.006666455 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184547691238 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058391725781 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594760114495 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121621849329 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536927477914 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.