Technical advancements are taking place day by day which brings the overall development in the country due to this progress people are buying cars individually. While i believe that purchasing cars by everyone has been beneficial for individuals, it is a negative trend for environment for some potential reasons that i am going to explain further.
On the one hand, majority of the vehicles are bought by people for their convenience and privacy. Firstly, from the privacy point of view, nowadays people buy car for their privacy as both genders are working and they need to commute daily from home to workplace. Also, this is most private mode of transportation because instead of waiting for busses people can go anywhere on time. Consequently, using cars has become the trend among the people and they can go anywhere with their family. Secondly, it is safe to travel by car as owing a car can protect people from pandemic as people can make distance from people outside. As a result, people tend to buy cars more because of developments. Finally, many people intends to show their social status as having a car indicates the richness of the person. That is why people buy car as a social symbol. Most importantly, As we know that time is gold, having a car provides convenient for example, we need to take a quick grocery trip then we can go quickly by car without being worried about the weather also.
On the other hand, buying more and more cars can have detrimental effects kn the environment. First of all, the number of vehicles, especially, cars is increasing than ever which leads to air pollution because most of the vehicles consume fuel which results in condemnation of environment. Besides this, if people would use cars everywhere then it will brings obesity problem and many other health disorders for the people as this is not eco- friendly . In addition to this, cars emit carbon dioxide and other green house gases that make the atmosphere dirty that leads breathing problem for the entire eco system. Last but not least, the car fuels does not only reduce the natural resources but also are not renewable.
To conclude, Although the cars are the convenient way of travelling for the individuals yet i believe that these have many harmful effects on our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87468030691 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64038869042 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531969309463 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2977500268 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329732796597 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118874237258 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678733506668 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199010466252 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536468828555 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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