Nowadays, it is argued that some countries which have a long time working hours are more prosperous. I completely disagree with the assertion due to some rational reasons which will be discussed in the following.
To begin with, to be a more successful country, lengthy working hours is not just a determinative factor. Alongside with how much workforces spend their time on workplaces, it is strategic planning which has a substantial role to play. If countries tend to be economically successful, they have to define and outline a comprehensive plan rather than increasing working hours. In many more advanced and developed countries, for instance, the standard working time is less than developing. The chief phenomenon of their success is having strategic and exhaustive planning.
In addition, the effectiveness and efficiency in workplaces are more imperative than working for a long time. It means, government officials should ensure the quality of doing jobs not how long hours spent in it. Lengthy working in organizations and manufactures not only is not an effective factor to become a better country economically but also put the jobholders’ healthy in jeopardy and consequently lead to disappointing performance. Economically, it is no matter how much time spent for doing a job but the accomplishment of it in the least time is the target.
In conclusion, I believe that being a much more prosperous nation is not rest on the long period of time spending in workplaces, other factors such as long-term planning and quality of doing jobs are much more vital.
- Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do you advantages of new development outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- the culture and traditions are changing from generation to generation. Why does this happen? what can be done to change it? 78
- Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Task 2 It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks Do you agree or disagree with this statement 95
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...eterminative factor. Alongside with how much workforces spend their time on workplac...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...osperous nation is not rest on the long period of time spending in workplaces, other factors s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21960784314 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19583542923 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2188371122 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453909493776 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161471573672 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858120577848 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268411628439 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462858012607 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.