crime is a big problem in the world many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? give your opinion.
Some people argue that nowadays the rate of criminals is increasing dramatically in lots of nations, and this problem is can not be prevented. Personally, I completely disagree with this opinion.
First of all, let research the reason why more and more people decide to become a criminal. The first reason is these people are under pressure of the financial burden which makes them must steal other items to have money. The second reason is many countries have overpopulations that lead to a major problem is an unemployment issue. As a result, they will find alcohol drinks, or even drugs to forget this pressure, which makes the percentage of violent crime rise rapidly.
Fortunately, we still have several solutions to block this issue. Firstly, governments need to focus on their education systems that raise kid's awareness. For example, schools will explain to students why crimes are bad and help them turn into good citizens by teaching. Moreover, governments also concentrate on creating more jobs for people so they can work to gain a salary which helps them afford their live conditions. Governments are giving subsidies to people who do not have a job to remove some small part of their financial burden. Furthermore, governments should improve police standards, which encourages them more confident in their duty progress. For instance, a policeman who has quality equipment and high morale can protect the area effectively.
In conclusion, crime is one of the major threats that many parts of the world are facing. Therefore, both governments and individuals must work together to push back this dramatic problem. If it is true, I believe that crime will prevent entirely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14181818182 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7640813039 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8210399491 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13875733093 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484524245249 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498582947898 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991327482317 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560847325682 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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