The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.
Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
Many countries in these recent years have witnessed an upward trend in the amount of criminals and this may lead to numerous consequences that are unforeseeable.this essay will look at the main causes of the problem and propose some solutions.
Firstly, the reason for the dramatic increase of crime rate among youngsters is because they might be abused during their childhood.To be more specific, children who were beated or raped in the past might affect badly to their maturity, therefore they can easily commit crimes when they grow up and somehow do exactly the same things happened to them with the victims.The solution to this problem is that, the government should inact strict law to those who are family's abusement and the residential should always condemn this issue to the society.Secondly,living condion is also considered at the main cause .Since most of the teenager's criminal are from low- conditioned families, they don't have a chance to get qualified teaching from school and parents, and also lack of money to afford their life , it will easily change a person, from a naive kids into a criminal. To tackle this problem,there should be more subsidies and scholarships to the children, it will definitely helpful and might save one children's future .
To sum up, due to the two reasons which are mentioned above , there are a variety of ways to solve the issue as if the whole community is involved. By taken it into practical, the society we are living in will be ways much better and better times to times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93023255814 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87981440106 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 286.83751498 49.4020404114 581% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 254.4 106.682146367 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169471221015 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609855586429 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055468461071 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865885889014 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509561764048 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.0946893788 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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