Over the years, it is undeniable that the crime cause by the adolescents have risen significantly. In this essay, we will first identify some of the possible cause of this and then propose two solution to the problems.
One of the major aspect that cause this problem must come from a nuclear family as the members have no time to check up on their children behaviors which can cause to them no being able to cope with their stress properly, causing them to get addicted to drugs or other substances. These substances can only help them only for a short amount of time, but its aftereffects are more harmful both in physical and emotional. They will soon have an uncontrollable emotion, also known as bipolar or even worse experience hallucination. The environment they lived in determined whether they will become a criminal or not. Studies said that children who grow up in slum have more chance of committing a crime when growing up than one who live in cities. It is believed that the reason behind all these crimes is due to some financial problems in the family.
The solutions must be followed when they were still children, the first step we could have done is that we give them some proper education so that they will become a better person and lived by the laws. Secondly those who lived in the slums should be given some financial supports like free utensils and their scholarship should be free of cost. Also, their well-being and sanitation should be considered by the government.
In conclusion, given the previously mentioned causes, giving these children proper education and those who lived in slums some help regarding their well being are the most effective in dealing with the issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
.... In this essay, we will first identify some of the possible cause of this and then propose...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
... and those who lived in slums some help regarding their well being are the most effective...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56845065662 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6427575676 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924063615223 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400327445952 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486723776114 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676843667411 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503406471697 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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