Nowadays, many cities around the world have seen alarming increases in the level of juvenile crime. The lack of affection from family and the negative influence from other peers are the main reason why many juvenile delinquency occur. However, this social issue can be tackled by parents and laws.
To begin, there is no doubt that the lack of affection from family can affect children’s psychology. In these days, both of parents in cities tend to concentrate on working to support their family financial rather than spend their time with their children. This is the primary reason why children are being neglected whilst everybody knows that neglected teenagers are more prone to become criminals. Another factor is from peer pressure. Because of not having many times to spend with their family, children will start to socialize with other people. As result of lack monitoring from parents, children will experience difficulties to filter their environment which this one is one of parents job. The children will easily be friends with the other criminal teens. The surveys conducted on teen crimes have revealed that teens who are friends with criminals are more likely to end up becoming a criminal. Additionally, teens will prefer committing crimes in the form of groups rather than doing it alone because it is exciting and also decreasing their chance to getting caught.
However, there are ways to solve this problem. Firstly, parents can give more attention to their children. Even though they have to work on weekdays and rest on weekend, they have to set aside their days off to play with their children. For example, they can go picnic, watching movies or just as simple as staying at home together playing monopoly. Laws also have an important role in overcoming this problem. Children who have committed crimes should be given strict punishment such as paying fine and putting them into the prison so they are wary to doing the same crime.
To sum this up, even though there are various reason for the increasing teenage crime, there are also many solutions available to solve this problem and prevented the teenager to commit the crime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05586592179 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43685588329 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3085451756 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2631578947 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15973561224 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526399907897 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840846790803 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156618174711 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130183818151 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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