It is irrefutable that nowadays the display of crime reports and other informative articles has been proliferated on TV and newspapers. I firmly disagree with this statement, showing these information through media would not leads to bad consequences instead, it has few benefits.
Firstly, sharing such crimes and other information on TV and other means will make citizens more conscious. In addition, people will have a rough idea about the things which are happening in the nation and they can also help government for few concerns with some suggestions. For instance, Ireland has several complaint box placed in various states which is beneficial for the citizens in order to suggest some improvements in the nation.
Furthermore, other information regarding population, industry development, transportation and many more. Such information will make people more knowledgeable and informative. Moreover, sharing this kind of information with the help of media would be more effective and will reach to more and more people than other sources.
To conclude, inspite of avoiding to share such news and reports through media to the public, government must show such information for making public more aware to put some positive effects on to the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...y disagree with this statement, showing these information through media would not leads to bad co...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ese information through media would not leads to bad consequences instead, it has fe...
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Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d not leads to bad consequences instead, it has few benefits. Firstly, sharing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44387755102 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96260797651 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1180751655 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256805619391 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113893419503 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078904667426 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158213118164 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918564401458 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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