Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem

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...e rising in the urban all over the world . There are a number of reasons behind th...
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...and individuals to improve the situation . There are two primary reasons why the ...
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...asons why the young people commit crimes . One reasons is that the parents dont ca...
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...rimes . One reasons is that the parents dont care enough about their children , they...
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...ts dont care enough about their children , they ignore their child behaviour and e...
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...gnore their child behaviour and emotions . This makes the teenage feel abandoned a...
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...want to get attention from their parents . Furthermore , they can be affected by t...
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...oods to eat and live in harsh conditions , so they have to steal and rob others . ...
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...s , so they have to steal and rob others . Fortunately , several measures could b...
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...s could be taken to prevent this problem . The first solution would be the family ...
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...young people about what crime is illegal . The parent should regularly encourage ,...
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...e , confide and encourage their children , educate them on positive things in life...
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... educate them on positive things in life . A second measure would be the governme...
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... need to be taken to tackle this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58988718378 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4104110538 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164864325264 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667274530899 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662395714669 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923434692699 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430019669411 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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