critically evaluate whether the cause of delinquent behavior in teenagers is mainly genetic or environmental. Analyze the effects this behavior has on society
Many people claim that the bad behavior of adolescents brings negative consequences for individuals and societies. this could be the effect of either environmental factors or genetic. this essay will shed on the role of both sections as well as determine the negative drawback of civilization.
The criminal behavior of youngsters can be caused by genetic. some researches indicate that individual who have criminal biological parent may have greater chance to commit a crime. Additionally, genetic factor plays an important role on inheriting a variety of mental disorders such as schizophrenia, depression, and anxiety disorders, consequently a genetic background is a sector to be considered. For instance, Jeremy Strohmeyer was convicted of raping and murdering an eight-year-old girl. he grew up in a loved and supportive family, nevertheless, his father has a history of schizophrenia and criminality syndrome which he suffered from. On the other hand, the environmental factors are known to contribute to adolescent delinquency include violence, permissive families, unstable neighborhood, and lacking education. some research suggests that exposure to violence in their living environment may increase violent behavior in children. According to the experiment on twins, the scientist separates twin into two different living-environment and observe their maturation. When they grow up, this twin has different characteristics, behavior, and thinking as well. moreover, there are some examples of living and growing in a negative community such as a criminal neighborhood, bad friends, and unhappy families that it is easy for to children learn bad habits and become antisocial.
The high rate of juvenile crime has affected seriously society. there will be lacking security and unsafe for citizens' life. Because of lacking awareness, this young crime can do anything regardless of the effect on others. Furthermore, it has a significant impact on the economy of the country. Due to the fact that increasing the number of adolescent criminals means that decreasing the figure of the future workforce. Most of the adolescent crimes are easy to get trouble with their family relationship. lacking connecting and supporting from their parent that they are easy to become more and more antisocial. it leads to bad consequences for themselves and society. moreover, growing rapidly in teenager crime has destroyed the connection among people, people are going to avoid to interact with the stranger, they become more vigilant and do not trust anyone.
In conclusion, both genetic and environmental factors play an important role in increasing the rate of teenage crime. Therefore, parents and schools need to educate the youngster carefully to guide them in the right way. About government should have suitable punishment to deter wrongdoing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2421.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59122401848 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19081514711 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565819861432 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4495597396 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.84 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.32 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.12 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145183419378 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384840803402 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518790295931 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913596235281 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430193875937 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.