currently more and more people respect elders and become convinced that older people should live with their families, which is in contrast to the view that older people should live at a nursing homes. What is your opinion?
The swelling of the aged population is an inescapable trend in many countries. The question as to whether nursing home suits the elderly people for the rest of their life better than their own homes. From my perspective, it is a decision that varies according to personal needs and circumstances.
It is true that with the non-stop development of medical advances, healthier lifestyles and anti-aging technologies, many older people are able to stay active in their old age. Many retired people desire to contribute more on society and maintain their independence, so condemning them in nursing home can make them feel excluded. Another noteworthy to note is that senior people have greatly influential on family members. In fact, without careful guidance of old people, little do young generations know how to appreciate the traditional values and promote national identity. Because of this, there are increasing number of youngsters assimilating into other cultures worldwide and being lured into social evils such as prostitution and drug. Hence, the retirement home proves not to be a perfect option.
However, it is irrefutable that nursing house is capable of meeting their elders’ needs. With top-notch medical staff and equipment available, these institutions offer the professional care service to old people, helping them averting from normal diseases and treating illness. Another preference for nursing home is that they can find enjoyment by socializing with peers of the same age sharing the similar interests. For many cases, nursing home functions well to help those who do not have the company of their families or are abandoned by their children as an economic burden.
In conclusion, many elderly people are able to remain healthy and active, they should be given chances to be involved in all sorts of activities they adore. However, those who are prone to loneliness or illness, should take nursing home into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: WHETHER[2]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...an inescapable trend in many countries. The question as to whether nursing home suits the elderly people f...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to avert' or 'avert'.
Suggestion: to avert; avert
...are service to old people, helping them averting from normal diseases and treating illne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32686084142 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82298979335 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614886731392 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6743670493 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198753638859 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599038213851 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571950993591 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119844677101 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240518240121 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.