Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, some people prefer using alternative forms of medicine, than tradition treating in hospitals or going to qualificate doctors. However, despite this trend, this form of treatment can bring an irremediable harm to a human health. In my oppinion, the alternative madicine rather dangerous, than ineffective.
I tend to think, that in the last centuries, the medicine was an extrimelly expencive phenomenon. Only rich, wealthy and affluent people could be able to take an advantage of doctor's attendance. As a result, destitute people had to invent their own way to cure deseases. Their methods of treatment were cheap, or no money was required at all. A remedy of that time was based on plants mostly as well as a manner of its appliance. Actually, some of the treats did work. but a significant death toll of the past period of time, points out that this medicine was not effective.
Unfortunately, currently the alternative medicine is figured out by mass media and internet as a new popular trend. it is claimed as something healthy, without a bad impact on human's body. some people believe that it is a natural way either to cure any desease, or keep the human body healthy and strong. For instance, aromatherapy helps reduse a strong headache or insomnia. but there is not any scientific aproval of it.
To conclude, I agree with the statement that the alternative medicine may be dangerous to some extend, but if somebody wants to try it, he has to study either positive, or negative possibilities of its impact on the human body or mind.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94296577947 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86701596395 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5548773819 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182998959423 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447923135797 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051694411585 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105627343988 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432764090625 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.