Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
It is argued that cycling can bring about various benefits/ is one of the best ways to protect our environment, however, there are still some uncommon pictures in the world nowadays. This essay attempts to shed light on both reasons why it is not common in some regions and address the question how we can improve its popularity.
There are two principal reasons behind the uncommon trend of using bikes in some places, which are the inconvenience and potential dangers for cyclists. Firstly, it is evident that people can not use bikes as a means of transportation when they want to commute a considerable distance. If they do, it will not only take time, but also it may place bikers into potentially hazardous circumstances. Especially, in big cities, traffic roads and a considerable amount of time make travelling by bikes become impractical . For example, in Ha Noi, which is the capital of Vietnam , many parents do not allow their children to go to school by bike due to the dangerous road conditions and traffic jams, which may potentially pose a threat to their safety.
However, I believe that governments always play a significant role in promoting the use of bikes, despite some uncommon cases like that. Firstly, they can take advantage of running campaigns, which urge people to take part in some social activities to protect the environment, such as monthly green days. If authorities conduct these types or programs, people's awareness will be raised and this habit will become a necessary thing in our daily life. Moreover, congestion charging or imposing a tax on car owners and motorists can encourage them to ride a bike frequently instead of using their private transportation.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of biking for the environment, it has become less widespread in many areas recently. However, with the government's prompt response, it can be altered soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07348242812 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88454933092 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619808306709 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2220269456 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0728731639593 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255474790608 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296069826042 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503689860784 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032710720288 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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