Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living

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Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living.

Over the last few years, a growing number of people hold a view that developing standard of life can affect the environment adversely. Most of them think that modern industry, especially some oil, gas factories can lead to the weather, water or some other pollution. I also think that improvement of standard of living can be hazardous for the future of our planet. In this essay, I am going to support my view with some examples.

First of all, it is undeniable that air pollution is one of the main issue in the environment. A plenty of plants, cars and factories produce many gases which can lea...

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