Currently, numerous people across the world are addicted to smoking, and at the same time, they are very well aware of the consequences of smoking. In this essay, I would like to identify the effects of smoking and propose some corresponding solutions.
A wide range of factors contributes to the fact that the majority of smokers are known to the after-effects of smoking. In the first place, the causes of smoking are stress, work overload, or a way of spending leisure time for working-class people. Unfortunately, the younger generation is also getting addicted to this killing habit at an immensely high rate due to bad company or as a showoff; thus the future is in the deep dark. In the second place, due to weak willpower and lack of knowledge people can't quit this habit even if they want to. As a result, people still continuing with smoking, which is not stimulating at all.
Fortunately, there are several solutions to this problem. The most urgent solution is running campaigns all over the country. Essentially, the government has to take the initiative and undertake great measures on smoking such as increasing the taxes and spreading knowledge to younger people, and highlighting the issues. likewise, the responsibility of change falls under each and every individual whether they want the change or not. Finally, there are some countries planning to ban smoking for people who are born after 2020, which is an influential idea for all the other countries to protect their future generation.
Overall, I must say in the coming future, we as a citizen of this planet going to win these war against smoke and life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... willpower and lack of knowledge people cant quit this habit even if they want to. A...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likewise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, likewise, second, so, still, thus, well, as to, such as, as a result, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97090909091 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81698743018 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0625063194 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205877362271 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645197151552 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373513213115 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117422808855 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246238566285 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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