The days many people do little or no exercise at all and they have health problems as a result. Why do not many people get enough exercise what can be done about it.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades.presently, most of masses suffer from health ailments as they do not do physical exercise. Here, I would like to account for reason and remedies for this phenomenon
There are manifold causes behind this working concern. First and foremost, in this era of inflation, masses have ha schedule and therefore they do not have enough time to spend their time on doing exercise. For instance, individuals have to do work round the clock in order to earn 2 square meal. Apart from it, it seems herculean task for the masses having children to give some time to exercise as they have to take care of their children after coming back from the work. Thus, folks maintain some distance from physical exercise. What is more, young blood have tendency to spend their leisure time on modern apparatus. There are fond of playing games such as pubg, free fire and GTA 5 in order to earn money by broadcasting it on social sites. They think that they can earn more money along with them if they will spend more time on playing. Hence, the importance of exercise is disappeared due to technology gidmos.
Numerous remedies can be taken to solve this burning issue. Initially, encourage the masses towards exercised by organised seminar is a fruitful penacea to overcome this problem. To epitome, government of a nation should organise seminar in every nook and corner of the world so that masses can understand the value of physical exercise. Moreover, advertisements of health articles in newspaper and magazines could be lucrative idea to encourage the filks towards exercise. Besides this, parents should give some example of prominent celebrities such as Milkha Singh who are name and fame along with money in athletic field so that young generation can stimulate to do exercise and prevent themselves from health issues.
To recapitulate, undeniable, health ailments spreading its root in every nook and corner of the world due to less attraction towards physical exercise. In my opinion, governing bodies and masses should share joint responsibility to nip this evil into Bud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06232294618 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67911697108 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1379757116 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.117647059 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186525433525 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586946260534 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460661065215 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100934779869 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534353977363 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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