Demand of food
Agricultural land was limited asset, where as emerging food consumption is becoming a topic of grave concern. This essay deal with the cause of hike in food consumption and which necessary steps international community take to catch the raising food demand along with my opinion.
Firstly, the rapid population growth is main cause of incline in food consumption. However, according to the senses of 2011, world population growth rate is about 3 percentage and going to cross the mark of 9 billion by 2030. Secondly, nowadays consumerism culture is trending among the societies. This trend leads to a food wastage. As an illustration, WHO recently publish a report in which organisation mention that every year near about 1/3 food going into trash.
With the increasing food demand, food processing technology is also emerging, which focusing to raise the crop production rates and cut the crop waste. Moreover, hybrid crops and plants of better production rate are developing and proposing by scientist. Apart from that, countries are join hands to tackle this problem. Developed nations are sharing their knowledge and technology with developing countries to raise crop production and low the crop waste. Furthermore, governments are launching an awareness campaigns and introducing new law to low the food wastage.
In conclusion, I am saying that the cut down the food wastage is necessary as to increasing the food production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3201754386 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90996459899 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5312543499 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369523112306 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121280410638 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117809118183 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227845340888 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619572495575 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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