Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming.
Why is global warming is problem?
What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
Numerous environmental tribulation is created by developed nations, typically the increasing of global warming. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain the reason of this issue and also put forward a number of remedial measures in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the argument above, there are several reasons this issue. It, first and foremost, is capable of increasing weather temperature across the globe since we knew that those prosperous countries had countless advanced technology that need a material which will render a negative impact to the world. Second but not less crucial, it, furthermore, will uplift the level of water in the ocean, which is in the end, if people do not take an action of it, it will confer an enormous problem to all nations around the globe.
In accordance with various challenges over, there are two counter measures for these tribulations. All countries around the earth, firstly, have to create a cooperation which concerned of minimizing the use of materials which will bestow a bad influence to the world. Secondly, every state, additionally, has to make a collaboration to another country to resolve to this problem together by creating an improved technology which will not provide any terrible impacts to the nature.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that all of these endeavours are efficient to plunge the consequence of the enhancement of developed nation. Thus, in order to make all of these efforts to be real, we, as a part of individuals who also live in earth, have to support all of those positive endeavours which was created by all countries across the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08088235294 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86178699889 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8419910479 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.2 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129327424992 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551023835549 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685833118349 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077779350386 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293193068066 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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